Peer Critique
We are what we repeatedly do. Excellence, then, is not an act, but a habit.” -Aristotle

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Date: 11.2.11
Work Sample:
Peer Critic(s): jmc4, jlw4
Creator(s): will, lauren
Please be sure to link this critique to the work page you are reviewing


Be KindWhat did you like about this work? Where did you see evidence of excellence?
Be SpecificHow specifically might this work be improved?
Be HelpfulIn light of what might be improved, how would you do it? Please give specific examples of how this might be done.
  • I liked that they were spesific with the explenation and added a few pictures to make the explenation stronger
They could tell how the phone works and why and how it does use energy. they could add details about how the energy in it works.
  • give even more info on the phone. If you are doing your page on the phone you might want to add details about how it works and the enery used.


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